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Pretending can be so mind boggling! Awesome imagery! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on July 12, 2009 at 9:28 PM
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As always, great work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 12, 2009 at 1:12 PM
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Sinome, anxiety can do horrible things to a person for a number of reasons
past, present and future can all be very worrisome...you capture that "anxiousness" very well..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 12, 2009 at 1:01 PM
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Sinome
"her soul always afraid of what is to come… of imminent catastrophes that will never happen"
A perfect description of someone who struggles with anxiety (I speak from personal experience). We worry about what the future holds rather than remaining in the moment – a moment which might actually be filled with small joys and a current of peacefulness if only if gave it a chance.
posted by
Troosha
on July 12, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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It is sometimes comforting to think "Tomorrow is another day."
posted by
Nita09
on July 12, 2009 at 4:59 AM
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that's all .......you said it!
posted by
Star5_
on July 12, 2009 at 2:57 AM
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Would be nice to be anxious about good things for tomorrow not angst! Well said Sinome
posted by
merkie
on July 11, 2009 at 8:46 PM
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Another heartbreaker.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 11, 2009 at 5:39 PM
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Exquisite. "self made prison" I have taken great pains to create some of these. Energy spent somewhere else could release the world.
posted by
texture
on July 11, 2009 at 2:42 PM
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Sinome
Great poem and I live like this too; "
of imminent catastrophes that will never happen" love from us'ns.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 11, 2009 at 12:53 PM
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Do it now love. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on July 11, 2009 at 6:50 AM
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A deeply "passionate"...
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 11, 2009 at 6:18 AM
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Sinome ~.~
A deeply passion piece of the existence many experience. Great write! Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 11, 2009 at 6:18 AM
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A heartbreaker for sure.
posted by
Ariala
on July 11, 2009 at 3:55 AM
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'They' always tell us to 'live for today' and in general I go along with that. But you are right for many people today is purgatory and the only thing thing that keeps them going is the thought of better times that may be ahead of them. You put it it so well Sinome!
Thanks for visiting me earlier this morning and leaving your kind comment.
posted by
elinjo
on July 10, 2009 at 11:15 PM
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This poem is a heart breaker Sinome.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 10, 2009 at 10:37 PM
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