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Some with gentle memories that haunt the beach with play
Some peoples struggle to survive with trials every day
I love these two lines. Great poem
thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on July 11, 2009 at 11:43 AM
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Excellent post!
posted by
janey_
on July 11, 2009 at 8:39 AM
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Everybody should walk your way love. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on July 11, 2009 at 7:17 AM
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footprints and a very fantastic thoughtful poem. I loved it. What
more could qw do than dance in the sand as humanity having respect and happiness with our lives. makes me feel good.
posted by
michaudblaine
on July 10, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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Wow!
Each challenge calling us to grow as one humanity with
footprints that dance!!!! What beautiful words!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 10, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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I too love the idea of dancing foot prints.
posted by
Straightforward
on July 10, 2009 at 10:04 AM
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I loved footprints that can dance! The rhyme scheme set up a very fine cadence, too! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on July 10, 2009 at 10:02 AM
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It's carazy that you and Mariaki both wrote about footprints today! Terrific, feel-good poem!
posted by
calia14
on July 10, 2009 at 8:40 AM
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Very nicely done
I like this one a lot
posted by
lionreign
on July 10, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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Very great ideas..knowing what to do while swaying on your feet in the sands of time..
for humanity...a great and novel thought!!!.
posted by
mariss9
on July 10, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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Beautifully expressed!
posted by
Chilitree
on July 10, 2009 at 12:28 AM
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Excellent!
posted by
hardilaziz
on July 9, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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A beautiful poem with so much truth in it Merkie. Just excellent.
posted by
shobana
on July 9, 2009 at 8:01 PM
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We all want to leave some footprints behind us when we leave.
posted by
Kabu
on July 9, 2009 at 7:58 PM
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Merkie
Lovely poetry again, I liked that luv.....
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 9, 2009 at 6:38 PM
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Hopeful and inspiring today, Merkie – a collective footprint is certainly something worth hoping for.
posted by
Troosha
on July 9, 2009 at 10:42 AM
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