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Now that's love!
Great poem. I feel the pain. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 30, 2009 at 7:03 AM
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posted by
Chilitree
on June 29, 2009 at 11:22 PM
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Hardilaziz..the intensity of love's pain is felt beautifully here.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 29, 2009 at 9:45 PM
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Now that is PROFOUND!!!!! Regarding the poem and its shape and meaning, it truly happened by accident! As it was coming together on the page in left block format I noticed the alignment! I started playing with the length of the sentences, entertaining another avenue for it when I suddenly realized that the uniformity might look good if it were centered! It was so impressive, shocked it was mine, that I could finish the previous format! I just got incredibly luck with that one! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 29, 2009 at 3:22 PM
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Subhanallah!
posted by
shamasehar
on June 29, 2009 at 6:25 AM
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So much said in these two short lines my friend!
Excellent phrasing indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 29, 2009 at 5:01 AM
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How concisely tragic
Everything necessary is spoken is these elegantly crafted lines
posted by
lionreign
on June 29, 2009 at 4:39 AM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on June 28, 2009 at 11:35 PM
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A BIG THANK YOU to all my friends here! - hardilaziz
posted by
hardilaziz
on June 28, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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I feel the same - how much harder it is when someone makes life better... and then they're gone...
posted by
mneme
on June 28, 2009 at 9:11 PM
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I love how you write happy or sad you touch my emotions.
posted by
Kabu
on June 28, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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Yes this is sad. Missed opportunities.
posted by
shobana
on June 28, 2009 at 7:59 PM
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Sad words ........
posted by
afzal50
on June 28, 2009 at 5:32 PM
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Such a profound thought within so few impressive words!
posted by
BrightIrish
on June 28, 2009 at 3:02 PM
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Ouch! Hardilaziz, simple and profound..plus painful to all who have
experienced it, or circumstances like it...
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posted by
Rumor
on June 28, 2009 at 11:58 AM
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That was beautiful in its simplicity. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
elinjo
on June 28, 2009 at 10:49 AM
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Simply devastating
posted by
malcolm
on June 28, 2009 at 10:25 AM
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Very well expressed!
posted by
Nita09
on June 28, 2009 at 10:19 AM
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