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The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start of our day
But storm, no storm,
Here I come

which I will admire from a distance

the children arent aloud outside to play

with that I sum

I watch a misty cloudy roll in

it sends shivers through my mind

I wonder what the storm will bring

What story will unwind

posted by merkie on June 23, 2009 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

I think it's a great idea, but I am no poet....

posted by mariposa75 on June 23, 2009 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start of our day

But storm, no storm,

Here I come

which I will admire from a distance

the children arent aloud outside to play

with that I sum

posted by lustorlove on June 23, 2009 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Really good idea which I'll follow and admire from a distance.

posted by elinjo on June 23, 2009 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

Just a little thing more

The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start  of our day

But storm, no storm,

Here I come

posted by auslander on June 23, 2009 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

Cool idea indeed!!!!!

 

The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start  of our day

posted by Sinome on June 23, 2009 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

What a cool idea Vogue!

The sky has brushed its teeth,

the sun has rubbed her eyes

The breeze watches the clouds go by

Revealing hues of blue underneath

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Can't wait to see how this plans out my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on June 23, 2009 at 4:35 AM | link to this | reply