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The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start of our day
But storm, no storm,
Here I come
which I will admire from a distance
the children arent aloud outside to play
with that I sum
I watch a misty cloudy roll in
it sends shivers through my mind
I wonder what the storm will bring
What story will unwind
posted by
merkie
on June 23, 2009 at 9:11 PM
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I think it's a great idea, but I am no poet....
posted by
mariposa75
on June 23, 2009 at 11:14 AM
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The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start of our day
But storm, no storm,
Here I come
which I will admire from a distance
the children arent aloud outside to play
with that I sum
posted by
Lanetay
on June 23, 2009 at 7:56 AM
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Really good idea which I'll follow and admire from a distance.
posted by
elinjo
on June 23, 2009 at 6:19 AM
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Just a little thing more
The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start of our day
But storm, no storm,
Here I come
posted by
auslander
on June 23, 2009 at 5:04 AM
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Cool idea indeed!!!!!
The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
revealing hues of blue underneath
and from the east, fingers of light
try very hard to pierce the gray
that like a blanket made of clouds
darkens the start of our day
posted by
Sinome
on June 23, 2009 at 4:59 AM
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What a cool idea Vogue!
The sky has brushed its teeth,
the sun has rubbed her eyes
The breeze watches the clouds go by
Revealing hues of blue underneath
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Can't wait to see how this plans out my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 23, 2009 at 4:35 AM
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