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Hey, I liked this one. It's about telling history in story form. Only your
ending seems to be fantasy. Such a round-about turn so abruptly.
posted by
Straightforward
on June 27, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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Thanks!
posted by
slam
on June 22, 2009 at 11:25 AM
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What foresight on the part of the old woman! It just amazes what the end result always is from greed: pure destruction! And they don't realize it but they have destroyed themselves; a tragic loss indeed! The land will always reclaim itself and return to dignity, almost quietly! Stupendous story, very well written and captivating! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 22, 2009 at 8:28 AM
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