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There are forty-five other parts to this story. Thanks for stumbling onto it. I hope you read the from the beginning. Once the story is complete, I'm going to rewrite it as a full novel. Thanks again.
posted by
Hackthorne19
on June 18, 2009 at 2:55 PM
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I really like this. You felt as if you were actually there on the deck of that boat, rolling on the waves. I’ve stumbled on this piece, is there more? Or is it just a trial?
posted by
slam
on June 18, 2009 at 8:22 AM
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You do know when to stop, right when the reader is chomping at the bit! Well done! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 17, 2009 at 6:42 PM
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Glad to know they reached international waters; now a little excursion to Iceland? Keep going, it's exciting.
posted by
elinjo
on June 17, 2009 at 12:45 AM
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