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Beautifully stark... such an image! Well done!
"venom of love" indeed. Maybe it seems strange, but it reminds me of the song that goes "Killing me softly with his song".
posted by
myrrhage_
on June 18, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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woah - intense and fairly dark in aspect
the image of assassin turned judge is so clever. thank you for sharing
posted by
lionreign
on June 17, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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These writings never cease to amaze me!
posted by
Chilitree
on June 17, 2009 at 6:47 AM
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wonderful hardilaziz
posted by
shobana
on June 16, 2009 at 10:19 PM
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Lovely words with sharp imagery! 
posted by
BrightIrish
on June 16, 2009 at 4:40 PM
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the venom of love...wow! now there's a metaphor and-a-half!
posted by
Rumor
on June 16, 2009 at 1:23 PM
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Nice, this leaves me with alot to think about.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 16, 2009 at 1:10 PM
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Wonderful post.
posted by
PlumpyNutCase
on June 16, 2009 at 3:50 AM
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Superb thoughts ........
posted by
afzal50
on June 15, 2009 at 5:51 PM
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Great selection!
posted by
Nita09
on June 15, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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To qoute Leoaerd Cohen's song"there ain't no cure for love"
profound write!
posted by
merkie
on June 15, 2009 at 9:40 AM
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Lovely words my friend
many blessings and thanks for sharing
posted by
mariaki
on June 15, 2009 at 6:04 AM
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I believe the Lord will render peace! Wonderful! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 15, 2009 at 5:18 AM
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posted by
shamasehar
on June 15, 2009 at 12:43 AM
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