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- who's stunning? - him, or her imagining what he will say to her?

posted by mneme on June 18, 2009 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

Azur

I too am hooked on these...they're serious and yet playful, cloaked in mystery...

posted by Nautikos on June 8, 2009 at 4:27 AM | link to this | reply

Be ever thankful for ideas.  A good writer can do anything he wants with ideas.

posted by TAPS. on June 7, 2009 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

A walk to stretch the mind...nice and even nicer, Dearest, is on the mind. Ideas, where and what will be next...I'm hooked, this is a lovely read.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 7, 2009 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Sinome.  I didn't know how to put into words exactly how this poem made me feel, but she nailed it :) 

posted by calia14 on June 7, 2009 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

beautifully written

posted by PlumpyNutCase on June 7, 2009 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

"The cure is to write myself through it."  Beautifully done.

posted by texture on June 7, 2009 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

I could feel the damp heaviness of the air, see into the bar,

it was ... as she said before me ... almost intrusive.

posted by Pat_B on June 7, 2009 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful letter Azur... This is so interesting... for it could be anyone to anyone and still somehow it feels so private and personal as if by reading it we were intruding :-)  Excellent!

posted by Sinome on June 6, 2009 at 10:17 PM | link to this | reply

Astonishing letter! I loved this one, I was so glued and so involved in the (I'm sitting here, lost for words) events as they unfolded; it was a though I received the letter! It truly spoke to the reader for me! Outstanding! So joyfully uncanny! I have to promote this one, please! sam  {My hockey team had just won their game tonight and I came out to see what might be happening and I found you, such fun!}

posted by sam444 on June 6, 2009 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply