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WOW - WOW - WOW. A classic Adam and Eve / Romeo and Juliet story feeling. But filled with so much truth. We can look at so many beautiful things, feel the beauty of the earth and nothing will matter until there is someone to share it with, someone to sync hearts with. Wonderful.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 5:41 PM
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I know this feeling, my friend...very well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 27, 2009 at 12:07 PM
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Re: s
Sorry... I was weraing mittens when I typed and accidentally submitted a single letter comment, I wasn't just trying to be enigmatic, I promise.
If you have time I would especially appreciate your opinion on today's offering
posted by
lionreign
on May 27, 2009 at 11:28 AM
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so very true
utterly elegant in it's phrasing and imagery, but the truth of it is heart rending
posted by
lionreign
on May 27, 2009 at 11:08 AM
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posted by
lionreign
on May 27, 2009 at 11:07 AM
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I am in paradise of music.......
They love playing the tunes, I love hearing the tunes
posted by
Star5_
on May 27, 2009 at 7:47 AM
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I've always felt close to the wind......and it's so lovely how every line is bathing in natures beauty.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 26, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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Sinome, a beautiful poem as always and a very poignant closing...
so true, if man or woman was alone, there would be no sharing....
(thanks for your encouragement to return...:)
posted by
Rumor
on May 26, 2009 at 6:22 PM
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wow! what a vivid image you cast into my mind. . ,
of the ocean and the skies and the trees behind my back. Very lovely. I really liked your line about how paradise was always meant to be shared by two.
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 26, 2009 at 5:13 PM
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Powerful.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 26, 2009 at 4:47 PM
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I want to be placed in paradise, too! Wow! this is eloqunt imagery!
Hey Sweetie! I am out of this mortgage mess! I found a house today and signed the papers! It is gorgeous! Perfect size for me! I have a walk in closet again! WOOHOO! Ah, the simple things in life! I can't wait to get moved! I am so happy! Love you, too! sammie xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 26, 2009 at 3:36 PM
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The yearning is expressed so well; wonderful! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on May 26, 2009 at 9:02 AM
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Sinome
A poem of silky tenderness...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 26, 2009 at 5:26 AM
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Rightly so Sinome.........
there is much beauty and magic here! Lovely piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 26, 2009 at 4:54 AM
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I want to be like you! Poetry!
posted by
lestate7
on May 26, 2009 at 3:17 AM
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