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Ah, a wonderful complement to lion's poetic line!!!! But woe is me...now I'm just craving all sorts of chocolate, strawberry, and vanilla foods!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on May 24, 2009 at 1:27 PM
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Dreams sure were different back then.
Now dreams of roller skating rinks have been exchanged for dreams about neverending drawers of bills.
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 23, 2009 at 2:36 PM
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...very nice!
...amazing sycronicity moment here... I read of "vanilla skies," and "strawberry Sun,"...as I'm eating a bowl of strawberry ice cream with vanilla cookies! xoxo
posted by
MasonGarrett
on May 21, 2009 at 3:34 AM
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Beautiful poem ... we still have a childlike quality hidden somewhere...
posted by
Chilitree
on May 21, 2009 at 2:08 AM
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dreamy and flowing as it should be
posted by
spiderfly
on May 20, 2009 at 9:31 PM
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Sinome, my princess of the OK sands is such a lovely dreamer
in those dreams
under vanilla skies sprinkled in pink,
by a strawberry sun that shyly hid
from a blue velvety moon that was in love with him ............xoxoxo -:)
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 20, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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Sinome
I love the very colour of your words luv, wonderful....
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 20, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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Ah, to dream the dream again! I think in some ways I rather like to do it again myself! Only, enjoy it much more the second time around! Outstanding imagery too! Love you almost the mostest! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 20, 2009 at 7:32 PM
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Reminiscent.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 20, 2009 at 12:18 PM
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It sounds like a lifelong dream. BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on May 20, 2009 at 11:18 AM
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awe inspiring
You just transport your reader to that same moment, same feeling - I love this completely
posted by
lionreign
on May 20, 2009 at 7:35 AM
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Beautiful thoughts of childish dreams Simone
it is never too late to get them back e? Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 20, 2009 at 5:30 AM
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Lovely thought of childhood dreams. Beautiful! 
posted by
BrightIrish
on May 19, 2009 at 9:50 PM
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