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Someday the door wil be open! Treasures are in the living! Well done.
posted by
merkie
on May 18, 2009 at 12:11 PM
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That door is always there. You're right about that.
The challenge is finding the key to open it.
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 18, 2009 at 4:14 AM
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Hm....this reminds me of a bible story...where doors were knocked upon to see who would open their doors. I cannot, for the life of me, remember exactly what it was right now. Perhaps you know what I'm speaking of. But this poem is amazing - and that door will always be there read to open, when it knows we are prepared to open it.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 17, 2009 at 7:57 PM
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WOW! I love this poem! KNOCK I say! sammie
Love you mucho too! xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2009 at 3:18 PM
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I see a lot of hope there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 17, 2009 at 3:00 PM
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I wasn’t sure if I should feel sad or hopeful (obviously I prefer the latter). Never stop knocking…. They way you pour your heart and soul out to us, Sinome, is breathtaking and so full of “you”.
posted by
Troosha
on May 17, 2009 at 11:58 AM
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Once again a wonderful poem; I loved the cloud imagery. Persistence should pay off in the end, so keep on knocking.
posted by
elinjo
on May 17, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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Yes...
I really liked this. And feel what you are conveying...
Doors are made to be opened. It will...I know it will, and you know it will!
(Meanwhile (mischievous thought) if I was you, I'd peak through the window!)
Raphael
posted by
Raphael222
on May 17, 2009 at 6:56 AM
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Keep on knocking...seeking the treasure within.
posted by
Texas_Gem
on May 17, 2009 at 6:46 AM
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This is very good.. I think a lot of us can relate to the idea of knocking on doors hoping to find what or who we need behind one.
posted by
mneme
on May 17, 2009 at 12:55 AM
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Hey, I like this one - it kind of resonates somewhere within me...
posted by
Straightforward
on May 16, 2009 at 10:23 PM
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Marta
That you have had a glimpse of the door dear princess, in itself is like the visions of the mystics. xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 16, 2009 at 9:19 PM
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I knocked on NBOMT's heart door....but that door seems like an iron door..
So I feel your pain too......it's a beautiful poem......
posted by
Star5_
on May 16, 2009 at 7:23 PM
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There's a huge and full of faith message in this "knock at the door". Even as we are lost..we are found. Reading your poetry I find it is always, colorful, filling and full of hope.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 16, 2009 at 6:57 PM
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Beautiful and haunting, but full of hope and trust. You are very special, Sinome.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 16, 2009 at 6:08 PM
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my new favorite! you are awesome
posted by
lestate7
on May 16, 2009 at 5:52 PM
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