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Someday the door wil be open! Treasures are in the living! Well done.

posted by merkie on May 18, 2009 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

That door is always there. You're right about that.

The challenge is finding the key to open it.

posted by Joe_Love on May 18, 2009 at 4:14 AM | link to this | reply

Hm....this reminds me of a bible story...where doors were knocked upon to see who would open their doors.  I cannot, for the life of me, remember exactly what it was right now.  Perhaps you know what I'm speaking of.  But this poem is amazing - and that door will always be there read to open, when it knows we are prepared to open it.

 

 

posted by NiteTide on May 17, 2009 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

WOW! I love this poem! KNOCK I say! sammie Love you mucho too! xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on May 17, 2009 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

I see a lot of hope there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 17, 2009 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply

I wasn’t sure if I should feel sad or hopeful (obviously I prefer the latter).  Never stop knocking….  They way you pour your heart and soul out to us, Sinome, is breathtaking and so full of “you”.   

posted by Troosha on May 17, 2009 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

Once again a wonderful poem; I loved the cloud imagery. Persistence should pay off in the end, so keep on knocking.

posted by elinjo on May 17, 2009 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

Yes...

I really liked this. And feel what you are conveying...

Doors are made to be opened. It will...I know it will, and you know it will!

 (Meanwhile (mischievous thought) if I was you, I'd peak through the window!)

 

Raphael

posted by Raphael222 on May 17, 2009 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

Keep on knocking...seeking the treasure within.

posted by Texas_Gem on May 17, 2009 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

This is very good.. I think a lot of us can relate to the idea of knocking on doors hoping to find what or who we need behind one.

posted by mneme on May 17, 2009 at 12:55 AM | link to this | reply

Hey, I like this one - it kind of resonates somewhere within me...

posted by Straightforward on May 16, 2009 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Marta

That you have had a glimpse of the door dear princess, in itself is like the visions of the mystics. xoxoxo

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 16, 2009 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

I knocked on NBOMT's heart door....but that door seems like an iron door..

So I feel your pain too......it's a beautiful poem......

posted by 9STAR on May 16, 2009 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

There's a huge and full of faith message in this "knock at the door". Even as we are lost..we are found. Reading your poetry I find it is always, colorful, filling and full of hope.

posted by yellowrose55 on May 16, 2009 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and haunting, but full of hope and trust.  You are very special, Sinome.

posted by TAPS. on May 16, 2009 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

my new favorite! you are awesome

posted by lestate7 on May 16, 2009 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply