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posted by spiderfly on May 15, 2009 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

Such a well written poem and with so much emotion.  I could almost feel the water surrounding me as the oceqn came and went iwth each wave.  Good read.

posted by michaudblaine on May 15, 2009 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Such a poignant close with this exquisite imagery! sam

posted by sam444 on May 15, 2009 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply