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Just catching up here.
With so many of your poems being so very good, it's hard for me to compliment the ones that are just "okay".
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 18, 2009 at 4:10 AM
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An age old question and thought beautifully wrapped in exquisite imagery! KUDOS! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2009 at 3:15 PM
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forget the bottom comment - I made a typo!
Marta, I'm starting to notice that as much as you love rain, there is a tinge of sadness in the note of your poetry when deals with rain also - and I hope upon hope it is not a heartache that is in real life - but your phrases are so intricately...delicately written, it makes me wonder if there is much more to the rain than you reveal in beautiful verse?
posted by
NiteTide
on May 16, 2009 at 9:00 AM
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Marta, I'm starting to notice that as much as you love rain, there is a tinge of sadness in the note of your poetry with it deals with rain also - and I hope upon hope it is not a heartache that is in real life - but your phrases are so intricately...delicately written, it makes me wonder if there is much more to the rain than you reveal in beautiful verse?
posted by
NiteTide
on May 16, 2009 at 8:58 AM
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nice to hear from you...
You're such a great poet. You come up with lines heartfelt and meaningful.
posted by
Sudanym_
on May 16, 2009 at 4:31 AM
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so beautifully done!!!
this is exquisite - and I think we all have the right to miss somebody who has touched a corner of our hearts
posted by
lionreign
on May 16, 2009 at 4:21 AM
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Very beautiful and wistful poem. Sad to miss and not be missed.
posted by
elinjo
on May 16, 2009 at 1:05 AM
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Sinome
My dearset princess Marta, I can, from your beautiful poetry, take a glimpse into your extremely loving heart in longings. "I miss you, too", xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 15, 2009 at 9:05 PM
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good girl!!! wow! even i have wondered if the rain misses the cloud sometimes...
posted by
bythewindowsill
on May 15, 2009 at 3:43 PM
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A great poem....
...you create the atmosphere so well! I can smell the rain. Hear the thunder...feel your feelings... Wonderful job!
posted by
Raphael222
on May 15, 2009 at 8:52 AM
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Seems the best time to wonder, in the midst of the rain. Especially when it's your poetry so eloquently telling it so.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 14, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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Never mind thatLOL I'll miss you while I am away for a few weeks
Big HUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG coming your way.
posted by
Kabu
on May 14, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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long over due rain would be nice here
posted by
Lanetay
on May 14, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Amidst all the rain clouds, he will miss you Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on May 14, 2009 at 7:30 PM
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Sinome
You really have a way of capturing the imagination luv;
"the statues in the yard seem to kneel"
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 14, 2009 at 7:23 PM
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riveting and filled with longing
posted by
Ariala
on May 14, 2009 at 6:49 PM
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well done!
posted by
shelly_b
on May 14, 2009 at 5:22 PM
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So heartfelt.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 14, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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