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Quite lovely
Your description of the tops of the trees dancing in the wind strikes quite an image. I had appreciation for this poem. Nice job!
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 18, 2009 at 4:04 AM
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I love it when a heart sings a song it has never heard before! Wonderful imagery! I am doing better these days and my young adults are hanging in there! I still have one child to tell yet but impossible to reach him in the Bering Sea! Time will come soon enough! How have you been? Love you very much sweetie! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2009 at 3:08 PM
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Singing in the rain has a wonderful feel to it Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on May 13, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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Your poetry always stirs me in strange ways
you have a real gift, thanks for sharing it with us.
posted by
muley12
on May 13, 2009 at 3:23 PM
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Rain being symbolic of purification. I always liked that symbol.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 13, 2009 at 12:16 PM
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as much I love watching the rain from my home.......I love ur song......
posted by
Star5_
on May 13, 2009 at 6:47 AM
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This is so gorgeous Sinome!
Rain always makes me think of a cleansing and re-birth; beautifully done as always; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 13, 2009 at 4:43 AM
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what a beautiful poem - as refreshing as the rain that you so lovingly write about
posted by
bythewindowsill
on May 13, 2009 at 4:01 AM
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Dearest Marta - before I go into great praises for your work because it's magnificent - I think there should be an 'e' instead of an 'i' in unencumbered.
Now, the real reason I'm commenting: This piece is a "storming beauty" if you don't mind the cliche too much. It's a lovely reminder on how much I love the rain (although - keep this a secret! - I'm scared of thunder!) and how much rain just seems to wash away all the bad of the days before it and leave a fresh new day to look forward to. Have you ever noticed the sky after a long day of rain? The first day the sun comes out is priceless. The skies are so beautiful that I just stand there and stare for the longest of times. I get lost in them. Can you tell how much I love this poem and all the things it reminds me of???
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posted by
Sinome
on May 12, 2009 at 10:04 PM
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I so love to hear you singing, my happy princess Marta of the warm ocen kissed sands.xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 12, 2009 at 9:45 PM
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You already know how much I love this poem!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on May 12, 2009 at 9:42 PM
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Oh.... Tis so close to me heart. I am a walker and lover of rain.
people do think I am insane, I have no worry of that, for i love what I love. So dear to me, this wonderful poem of yours.
posted by
tessmae
on May 12, 2009 at 9:41 PM
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