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Quite lovely

Your description of the tops of the trees dancing in the wind strikes quite an image.  I had appreciation for this poem.  Nice job!

posted by Joe_Love on May 18, 2009 at 4:04 AM | link to this | reply

I love it when a heart sings a song it has never heard before! Wonderful imagery! I am doing better these days and my young adults are hanging in there! I still have one child to tell yet but impossible to reach him in the Bering Sea! Time will come soon enough! How have you been? Love you very much sweetie! sammie xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on May 17, 2009 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

Singing in the rain has a wonderful feel to it Sinome.

posted by shobana on May 13, 2009 at 7:37 PM | link to this | reply

Your poetry always stirs me in strange ways

you have a real gift, thanks for sharing it with us.

posted by muley12 on May 13, 2009 at 3:23 PM | link to this | reply

Rain being symbolic of purification. I always liked that symbol.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 13, 2009 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

as much I love watching the rain from my home.......I love ur song......

posted by 9STAR on May 13, 2009 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

This is so gorgeous Sinome!

Rain always makes me think of a cleansing and re-birth; beautifully done as always; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on May 13, 2009 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

what a beautiful poem - as refreshing as the rain that you so lovingly write about

posted by bythewindowsill on May 13, 2009 at 4:01 AM | link to this | reply

Dearest Marta - before I go into great praises for your work because it's magnificent - I think there should be an 'e' instead of an 'i' in unencumbered. 

Now, the real reason I'm commenting:  This piece is a "storming beauty" if you don't mind the cliche too much.  It's a lovely reminder on how much I love the rain (although - keep this a secret! - I'm scared of thunder!)  and how much rain just seems to wash away all the bad of the days before it and leave a fresh new day to look forward to.  Have you ever noticed the sky after a long day of rain?  The first day the sun comes out is priceless.  The skies are so beautiful that I just stand there and stare for the longest of times.  I get lost in them.    Can you tell how much I love this poem and all the things it reminds me of??? 

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posted by Sinome on May 12, 2009 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

I so love to hear you singing, my happy princess Marta of the warm ocen kissed sands.xoxoxo

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 12, 2009 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

You already know how much I love this poem!!!

posted by NiteTide on May 12, 2009 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Oh.... Tis so close to me heart. I am a walker and lover of rain.

people do think I am insane, I have no worry of that, for i love what I love. So dear to me, this wonderful poem of yours.

posted by tessmae on May 12, 2009 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply