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Your poetry always moves and touches the soul. Beautiful Sinome...
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yellowrose55
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May 6, 2009
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I'm back...and reading this you have pulled on every heartstring of mine until they are taut with seasoned emotions. Love lost hurts, but I think the dull pain of lost love and remembered, is an ache that will never leave that one part of our heart that will always recall another form of love - another moment of love. This is precious, Marta.
posted by
NiteTide
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May 5, 2009
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Impressive.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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May 5, 2009
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I'm awful. I have yet to read you beautiful poems - and since I haven't had my fix, and I assure you, your poems are my "fix" - I've been grouchy.
As soon as this hellish grading is over, I'll be here, first thing!
posted by
NiteTide
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May 5, 2009
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tragically gorgeous
You capture the shards of a shattered heart and clothe them in the beauty of your soul and so how can we read and remain unmoved? this is beauty incarnate
posted by
lionreign
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May 5, 2009
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That's a really beautiful, powerful and wistful poem. The imagery especially about the river is very effective. Thank you for sharing it.
posted by
elinjo
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May 5, 2009
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Nice work!
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
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May 5, 2009
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Looking back on young love with foresight Sinome
we understand many things and pain takes on new meaning; beautiful write my dear; many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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May 5, 2009
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posted by
Chilitree
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May 4, 2009
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Sinome
Oh my princess Marta, you are such a born poet. I fall short of words. What beauty!!! xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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May 4, 2009
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I have many painful, bittersweet memories, myself.
You have romantically written a wonderfully touching poem.
posted by
tessmae
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May 4, 2009
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Pathos rules the lines with sorrow split to blot memory with darkened smudges Lasting into the dark night sky!Poignant poetry Marta!
posted by
merkie
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May 4, 2009
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I always read back, it is like looking at old photos. don not dwell on sadness though
posted by
spiderfly
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May 4, 2009
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Oh, Sinome... I so feel these beautifully written words.
My heart is soooo broken from so much sadness right now, on many different levels. Sooooooooooo sad. xooxoxoxoxoxoxxo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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May 4, 2009
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Sinome
All of your poetry is so captivating and this one a bit sad luv..
posted by
WileyJohn
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May 4, 2009
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Beautiful Sinome
posted by
shobana
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May 4, 2009
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It is amazing how some have a grip on us, even to the end! Wonderful imagery Sinome! Love you! sammie
posted by
sam444
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May 4, 2009
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Ohooo that is a sadly sweet one.
posted by
Justi
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May 4, 2009
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