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The romance of your words always put my heart at a flutter.  The image you put in my mind is so vividly clear that I feel like I am there - actually, I more feel like I WANT to be there.  Your poetry brings out my hopeless romantic side, and I always end up sighing in complete happiness.  This poem makes no difference.  I'm at a loss of words as I imagine that window...and the thoughts that are fluttering through the mind...it is a whimsical and beautiful image. 

posted by NiteTide on May 3, 2009 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

Simone

The horizon you painted with mere words was quite beautiful.  The story you wove into the description was very sad.

posted by Joe_Love on May 3, 2009 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

As much as I love living where I do, there's nothing more I'd rather see right now than "...a majestic mountain, tall and true, humbling all with its might..."  I love the way you describe nature in your poetry. 

posted by TAPS. on May 3, 2009 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply

very nicely written

posted by lustorlove on May 3, 2009 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

I wonder if you think of us

A wonderful evocation of the beauties of nature!

posted by 2Philomena on May 3, 2009 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

Most excellent imagery! I was left to ponder my own thoughts of what someone might be thinking about me too! Love you the mosest too! sammie xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on May 3, 2009 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

Strikes a chord with me...

posted by Straightforward on May 3, 2009 at 5:58 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant and evocative; you have a wonderful way with thoughts and words! Nita.

posted by snowview on May 3, 2009 at 4:31 AM | link to this | reply

...as someone trying to escape would...

I like this poem...nicely written...you can feel it...Kathy

posted by Maryka77 on May 2, 2009 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Thunder interrupted my afternoon rest today as well luv but I couldn't have expressed that thought as beautifully as do you, always.

posted by WileyJohn on May 2, 2009 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed reading this.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 2, 2009 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

hello poet finally home and so happy to read perfection

from a real poet! you are special indeed 

posted by lestate7 on May 2, 2009 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

A moment by the window you turn into a creative journey through the loving heart and mind. Pondering...Nice one Sinome.

posted by yellowrose55 on May 2, 2009 at 3:35 PM | link to this | reply