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Such poignant reflection! I liked the imagery and its symbolism! Love to you! sammie xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on May 1, 2009 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

I like this a lot with the use of the temple.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 27, 2009 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

All decays.....the good, the bad and the ugly. Only the eternal soul lasts. It is to be trusted, above all else!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 27, 2009 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply

Darling I agree so much with our Wiley, I shall just add me too.

posted by Kabu on April 27, 2009 at 6:43 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

I just love your soul and how you spill it out here luv, wonderful

posted by WileyJohn on April 27, 2009 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

What an image, Sinome.  I felt as if I were there in person and I kept taking very careful steps and looking for snakes.  I felt as if one of the large vines would turn into an ever-watchful boa constrictor that would unhinge its jaws and try to swallow my head.  Beautiful!

posted by TAPS. on April 27, 2009 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

A beautiful piece my dear Sinome

excellent imagery and a superbly told tale; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on April 27, 2009 at 5:10 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful, beautiful poem, my friend

This is not a thing to read - it is an experience, a moment from your mind which we can share with utter clarity, flavoured by your nostalgia, and the yearnings of your wonderful heart.

Well done, indeed

posted by lionreign on April 27, 2009 at 4:04 AM | link to this | reply

so lovely

This is so beautiful. Childhood promises, love, memories all make u who we are today! So well written!

posted by Primroses on April 27, 2009 at 2:23 AM | link to this | reply

Such a beautiful poem. It is so visual, emotional and well done.

posted by Justi on April 26, 2009 at 11:45 PM | link to this | reply

What a journey!  Thanks for sharing, the imagery in this poem is astounding!

posted by calia14 on April 26, 2009 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Your recreation was magnificent.  I could so easily envision the ivy strung cave hidden inside the deep caverns of the lushest greens - nature an ever powerful force to deal with - and I could feel the nostalgia dripping inside every line as it talked about an endearing past.  It made me want to be there, right where it all happened, so I could see it in person. 

posted by NiteTide on April 26, 2009 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

I Wonder

This poem is just fabulous.

It recreates the very steam and heat, the colors,

The majesty, the decay and the glory of the jungle. And the contrast of the young lovers praying in that ancient temple...!

Too beautiful

Raphael

posted by Raphael222 on April 26, 2009 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

very beautiful

posted by hazel_st_cricket on April 26, 2009 at 8:51 PM | link to this | reply