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This is LOVE! Right on! Superb imagery! Love you mostest, mostest! I saw Vicki's note! I will e-mail her new address to you today sweetie! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2009 at 6:02 AM
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Great conclusion.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 26, 2009 at 4:51 PM
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WoW.......
posted by
Star5_
on April 25, 2009 at 9:52 PM
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very passionate and no; no need to think Love it as usual darlin'
posted by
Kabu
on April 25, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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Whoa! Mind blowing drwaing my deepest feelinf and emotions passionated!
posted by
Mystereo
on April 25, 2009 at 5:56 PM
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first I want to say thank you for using my name and this is a wonderful poem I love it
posted by
Lanetay
on April 25, 2009 at 10:09 AM
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Sinome
I think those are called thinkless moments….. 
posted by
Troosha
on April 25, 2009 at 8:30 AM
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It is bliss. Nothing less, nothing more!
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 24, 2009 at 11:32 PM
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Very poignant!
posted by
Nita09
on April 24, 2009 at 11:22 PM
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It has such a pained ending....almost desperate not to lose one perfect moment...not to lose one perfect love. And yet, I feel it is trying to say live without regrets - take each moment that life gives and go with it. Maybe I'm reading too much or too little into it, but for me, it seems more like life or loss rather than love or lust.
Am I crazy? Probably.
posted by
NiteTide
on April 24, 2009 at 10:54 PM
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Its only protoplasmic! You can guess the rest!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 24, 2009 at 10:47 PM
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very wonderful !!! xoooooooooooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 24, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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