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I commend you on this read for the fact that it was just moving and real. I was that kid that runaway made my way back home yet, I never had to put myself in that position. Bless then without knowledge bless now with it. Great read!!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 7, 2010 at 8:58 PM
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Very Nice.....
Take a bow.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 19, 2009 at 12:30 PM
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A wonderful poem indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 19, 2009 at 6:19 AM
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dougspoetry
This is fantastic! Loved every singly word, and the underlying teaching.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 18, 2009 at 10:04 PM
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Beautiful!
Wow, what a beautiful poem. Compassionate and reflective of God's loving nature.
posted by
janey_
on April 18, 2009 at 10:02 PM
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This is a perfect poem. You write with such compassion and empathy! Just beautiful!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 18, 2009 at 12:37 AM
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The light of hope is what we need in times of distress. Excellent.
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 17, 2009 at 8:03 PM
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