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Sinome
Beautiful as usual and I agree luv, "Writing is a curse as well as a blessing"
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 17, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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Beautiful and splendid words !
posted by
afzal50
on April 17, 2009 at 8:39 PM
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Sinome
Indeed, oh my goodness…. The birth of thoughts, swirling around in our head, put into words in a way that only you can do.
posted by
Troosha
on April 17, 2009 at 9:18 AM
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Oh my goodness. This is awesome, beautifully written, such mental imagery, such worship and achievement of the forming the form of your creative imagination.
posted by
Justi
on April 16, 2009 at 11:47 PM
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So wonderfully conceived, so wonderfully expressed, so wonderfully concluded, by the so wonderfully ocean kissed one. princess Marta xoxoxo -:)
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 16, 2009 at 7:21 PM
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Sinome
This is very insightful and though-provoking! You manage to speak of, and in a sense give voice to, something that always wants to remain hidden and mysterious...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 16, 2009 at 7:11 PM
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Re: As excellent an understanding of inspiration I've ever heard!
errr...read.
posted by
metalrat
on April 16, 2009 at 5:25 PM
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As excellent an understanding of inspiration I've ever heard!
posted by
metalrat
on April 16, 2009 at 5:24 PM
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Great job capturing the essence of birth.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 16, 2009 at 4:03 PM
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That's beautiful, Sinome.
Birth is hard work. It doesn't come easy
whether it is a form of life or a work of art or writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 16, 2009 at 2:26 PM
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I loved concludinmg with love an idea! For in it lies great truth! Astounding lead up imagery too! sammy loves you almost the mosetst of the mostest too[see, second isn't bad; lol]! This is a very fine poem sweetie! sammy
posted by
sam444
on April 16, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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nicely written words and poem
posted by
Lanetay
on April 16, 2009 at 9:21 AM
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Very powerful; you have a wonderful way with words! Thanks for your kind comment on my post; I'm glad you're enjoying some glimpses of India! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on April 16, 2009 at 5:08 AM
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Sinome
There is some very deep stuff here, the imagery is excellent and carries you away; very well done my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 16, 2009 at 2:28 AM
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The mind is the dark side's brain and it is the same dark side in the heart. Then, there is soul.......
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 15, 2009 at 11:19 PM
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feel truth as sensation,
and love... as idea. " Excellent formed images!
posted by
merkie
on April 15, 2009 at 9:09 PM
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I love this powerful line
The mind rambles on in its lowly erudition trying to mimic the heart
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 15, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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You said it...keep writing, my dear
posted by
Ariala
on April 15, 2009 at 6:26 PM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 15, 2009 at 4:30 PM
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