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Sinome

Beautiful as usual and I agree luv, "Writing is a curse as well as a blessing"

posted by WileyJohn on April 17, 2009 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and splendid words !

posted by afzal50 on April 17, 2009 at 8:39 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Indeed, oh my goodness….  The birth of thoughts, swirling around in our head, put into words in a way that only you can do.    

posted by Troosha on April 17, 2009 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Oh my goodness. This is awesome, beautifully written, such mental imagery, such worship and achievement of the forming the form of your creative imagination.

posted by Justi on April 16, 2009 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

So wonderfully conceived, so wonderfully expressed, so wonderfully concluded, by the so wonderfully ocean kissed one. princess Marta xoxoxo -:)

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 16, 2009 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

This is very insightful and though-provoking! You manage to speak of, and in a sense give voice to, something that always wants to remain hidden and mysterious...

posted by Nautikos on April 16, 2009 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: As excellent an understanding of inspiration I've ever heard!

errr...read.

posted by metalrat on April 16, 2009 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

As excellent an understanding of inspiration I've ever heard!

posted by metalrat on April 16, 2009 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

Great job capturing the essence of birth.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 16, 2009 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

That's beautiful, Sinome.
Birth is hard work.  It doesn't come easy
whether it is a form of life or a work of art or writing. 

posted by TAPS. on April 16, 2009 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

I loved concludinmg with love an idea! For in it lies great truth! Astounding lead up imagery too! sammy loves you almost the mosetst of the mostest too[see, second isn't bad; lol]! This is a very fine poem sweetie! sammy

posted by sam444 on April 16, 2009 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

nicely written words and poem

posted by lustorlove on April 16, 2009 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply

Very powerful; you have a wonderful way with words! Thanks for your kind comment on my post; I'm glad you're enjoying some glimpses of India! Nita.

posted by snowview on April 16, 2009 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

There is some very deep stuff here, the imagery is excellent and carries you away; very well done my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on April 16, 2009 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply

The mind is the dark side's brain and it is the same dark side in the heart. Then, there is soul.......

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 15, 2009 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

feel truth as sensation,
and love...  as idea. " Excellent formed images!

posted by merkie on April 15, 2009 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

I love this powerful line  The mind rambles on in its lowly erudition trying to mimic the heart

posted by chuck_ibrahim on April 15, 2009 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

You said it...keep writing, my dear

posted by Ariala on April 15, 2009 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

posted by hazel_st_cricket on April 15, 2009 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply