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You were a Knight..
Because by stealing the kiss, you would have won the heart.. Very beautiful poem.. 

posted by orcalion on April 27, 2009 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

Well done Knight!
.. a thief by any other name and all that..I like this poem. Kathy

posted by Maryka77 on April 22, 2009 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

"I am less the thief and more the knight."Superb line!Excellent poem again!

posted by merkie on April 17, 2009 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hey, OK. I didn't see that other connotation to knight!
that's ok - it's the peril of imagery... everyone has their own associations with different images.

posted by lionreign on April 17, 2009 at 3:58 AM | link to this | reply

Hey, OK. I didn't see that other connotation to knight!

posted by Straightforward on April 17, 2009 at 3:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: More the knight? Isn't that macho?
Well I guess that would depend on your associations of knight - I was going for the disciplined guardian, rather than steel clad thug

posted by lionreign on April 17, 2009 at 3:23 AM | link to this | reply

More the knight? Isn't that macho?

posted by Straightforward on April 17, 2009 at 3:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice one Lion
Thank you, my friend, I am glad you enjoyed this

posted by lionreign on April 17, 2009 at 2:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: your good qualities will keep you as a knight forever...we believe in you
Thanks Sue

posted by lionreign on April 17, 2009 at 2:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Yellowrose55
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it, although I am still not sure which role is healthier

posted by lionreign on April 17, 2009 at 2:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444
Thank you - I am glad you enjoyed this

posted by lionreign on April 17, 2009 at 1:59 AM | link to this | reply

Nice one Lion
from start to brilliant finish! Amazing what a kiss can do... Many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on April 16, 2009 at 1:49 AM | link to this | reply

your good qualities will keep you as a knight forever...we believe in you
lion king......hahaha....

posted by Star5_ on April 15, 2009 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

Nice one Lionreign, just one is all it takes. I enjoyed that last line, "I am less the thief and more the knight".

posted by yellowrose55 on April 15, 2009 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

What a great poem; I love the stolen kiss and how it developed! KODOS!!! sam

posted by sam444 on April 15, 2009 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply