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Very evocative, specially
the breeze brings me scents of my far away home
while the cold in the air cuts through my thoughts like a knife.
God bless. Nita.

posted by snowview on April 15, 2009 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

You give a different point of view on April. In example you use the imagery of the sea and the night instead of flowers and cute little bunnies. BCA, Bill*s Roost

 

posted by BC-A on April 14, 2009 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, You captured my attention with this amazing poem. I watched the vivid imagery unfold and enjoyed every last word. Blessings!

posted by Texas_Gem on April 14, 2009 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply

posted by _Twins on April 14, 2009 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

Oh the beauty of this fine piece Sinome!

stupendous imagery and excellent ending my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on April 14, 2009 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

Loved the imagery, and the evocative words draws one to the heart-felt feelings xoxoxo

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 13, 2009 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

Just beautiful...Whether it's wind, rain or shine, I miss walking on beach.

posted by yellowrose55 on April 13, 2009 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

That's obviously the better half!

posted by hardilaziz on April 13, 2009 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! Wonderful imagery with a very thought provoking and evocative ending my dear Sinome! Wonderful! Love you! sammy xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on April 13, 2009 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

Very, very Lovely !!

posted by hazel_st_cricket on April 13, 2009 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply

I'm getting impatient now for spring.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 13, 2009 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

That is a very lovely poem Sinome! Thank you for visiting me and leaving your comment.

posted by elinjo on April 13, 2009 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

very lovely

posted by lustorlove on April 13, 2009 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply