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Change is inevitable. But the soul...it's immortal.
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hardilaziz
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March 29, 2009
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wonderful.
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hazel_st_cricket
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March 28, 2009
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~ fine work.. truly fine
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OTA.
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March 28, 2009
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Great job!
I love this one! The best fires are started from embers! That's my line! And you said it best!
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CRShelley
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March 28, 2009
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strange life how the up become down ...well written Sinome
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drohan254
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March 28, 2009
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"A change of heart"......so sad and then over time to find new light. Brilliant ending.
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yellowrose55
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March 28, 2009
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How true. When the fire burns out, a new one must be started.
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TAPS.
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March 28, 2009
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before I write I read you to see how it is done! you are poetry!
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lestate7
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March 28, 2009
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sinome
Eventually, all flames become extinguished
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TIMMYTALES
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March 28, 2009
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Comparing the passion to a flame is so true.
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FormerStudentIntern
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March 28, 2009
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Thanks so...
much for your awesome comments in TymeProse.
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GingerTyme
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March 28, 2009
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This was reflective of when it is over it is time to look for a new star to wish upon! I love the examples and how they tied the imagery together! The congruity is fabulous! Love you so my dear friend! sammy
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sam444
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March 28, 2009
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sometimes you just have to let it die
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lustorlove
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March 28, 2009
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the transforming shape of love from passion to caring ! ??
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merkie
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March 28, 2009
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