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posted by
drohan254
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March 27, 2009
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Stunning work, Sinome!!
posted by
myrrhage
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March 26, 2009
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I also can't believe that sometimes love just ends!
posted by
Straightforward
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March 26, 2009
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(S)awesome as usual
posted by
lestate7
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March 26, 2009
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A beautiful but sad poem.
The changing of the seasons of one's life is always hard to bear.
posted by
muley12
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March 26, 2009
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Cool idea to talk about how to stop loving must be/feel like only to end with saying it won't happen.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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March 26, 2009
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Stunning similes! I think it wonderful the resolve at the close of the poem! I love you missy! sammy
I just saw my e-mail! Stunning! So beautiful! So very beautiful! I will write soon, promise!
posted by
sam444
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March 26, 2009
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Sinome
You leave me breathless and I was so happy to reach the end when you chose not to believe what “they” tell you…..
posted by
Troosha
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March 26, 2009
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I know your sentiment by now. Your love is precious and timeless.
posted by
hardilaziz
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March 26, 2009
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Very beautiful indeed, and the ending is so powerful.
posted by
snowview
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March 26, 2009
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hello marta
I hope you do indeed never have the experience of not loving someone anymore. It's very strange. The saddest thing is that you feel like you never loved them in the first place. Then comes the forgetting ....
posted by
GingerTyme
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March 26, 2009
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Superb.....people do give up to easily. Sinome, loved the way you ended this poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
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March 25, 2009
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Very nicely written, Marta...
posted by
Kayzzaman
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March 25, 2009
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The paper boat always sinks!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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March 25, 2009
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