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posted by drohan254 on March 27, 2009 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

Stunning work, Sinome!! 

posted by myrrhage on March 26, 2009 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

I also can't believe that sometimes love just ends!

posted by Straightforward on March 26, 2009 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

(S)awesome as usual

posted by lestate7 on March 26, 2009 at 4:51 PM | link to this | reply

A beautiful but sad poem.
The changing of the seasons of one's life is always hard to bear.

posted by muley12 on March 26, 2009 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

Cool idea to talk about how to stop loving must be/feel like only to end with saying it won't happen.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 26, 2009 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning similes! I think it wonderful the resolve at the close of the poem! I love you missy! sammy  I just saw my e-mail! Stunning! So beautiful! So very beautiful! I will write soon, promise!

posted by sam444 on March 26, 2009 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

You leave me breathless and I was so happy to reach the end when you chose not to believe what “they” tell you…..

posted by Troosha on March 26, 2009 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

I know your sentiment by now. Your love is precious and timeless.

posted by hardilaziz on March 26, 2009 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful indeed, and the ending is so powerful.

posted by Nita09 on March 26, 2009 at 3:37 AM | link to this | reply

hello marta
I hope you do indeed never have the experience of not loving someone anymore.  It's very strange.  The saddest thing is that you feel like you never loved them in the first place.  Then comes the forgetting ....

posted by GingerTyme on March 26, 2009 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

Superb.....people do give up to easily. Sinome, loved the way you ended this poem.

posted by yellowrose55 on March 25, 2009 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

Very nicely written, Marta...

posted by Kayzzaman on March 25, 2009 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

The paper boat always sinks!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 25, 2009 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply