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I soooo agree with sam....this is wonderful and I'm copying it for my keeper book.  I'm not a fanatic about keeping things short and have read many things by you that are much longer and just as brilliant....but what's so rich here, is that you can also write something with just four lines that has your trademark humor and deep thought with such a hook that it makes the reader go "wow"!  Bravo!

posted by Krisles on March 26, 2009 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

This is absolutely brilliant! sam

posted by sam444 on March 23, 2009 at 12:06 AM | link to this | reply