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We have some whipping March winds here today, but nothing else much comparable to what you describe in your poem.  The forsythia bushes and daffodils are, though, beginning to bloom nicely.

posted by TAPS. on March 19, 2009 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful

Your poem is a wonder and a joy to read.  Thank you

posted by lionreign on March 19, 2009 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

very lovely, Sinome.

posted by hazel_st_cricket on March 19, 2009 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent, my friend.

posted by hardilaziz on March 19, 2009 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

How wonderful to read you again – time seems to stand still when a linger in your words.

posted by Troosha on March 19, 2009 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

on the sand

Oh, I read this as if I was standing there, feeling the ebb and tide of my life moving under my feet! Bravo, Sinome!! This is beautiful and heartfelt.

Cee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on March 19, 2009 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

O, the lady sea has my son! Atonishing imagery my Sinome! The sea and the setting sun are a wondrous combination! sammy xoxoxo

posted by sam444 on March 19, 2009 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

One of those poems where I feel like I am there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 19, 2009 at 5:56 AM | link to this | reply

You bring out the different shades of emotions so well, and paint such vivid pictures. God bless. Nita.

posted by snowview on March 19, 2009 at 3:16 AM | link to this | reply

what can you say? mmmmm damn your good!

posted by lestate7 on March 19, 2009 at 1:42 AM | link to this | reply

a nice weather description

posted by lustorlove on March 18, 2009 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

You write it so beautifully, Marta...

posted by Kayzzaman on March 18, 2009 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Piognant...

...and full of lovely imagery(I love the water), yet somehow not depressing. I like the way you finished it...closure, yet a tinge of hope.

posted by metalrat on March 18, 2009 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply