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We have some whipping March winds here today, but nothing else much comparable to what you describe in your poem. The forsythia bushes and daffodils are, though, beginning to bloom nicely.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 19, 2009 at 1:18 PM
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beautiful
Your poem is a wonder and a joy to read. Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on March 19, 2009 at 12:21 PM
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very lovely, Sinome.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 19, 2009 at 11:28 AM
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Excellent, my friend.
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 19, 2009 at 10:07 AM
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Sinome
How wonderful to read you again – time seems to stand still when a linger in your words.
posted by
Troosha
on March 19, 2009 at 9:40 AM
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on the sand
Oh, I read this as if I was standing there, feeling the ebb and tide of my life moving under my feet! Bravo, Sinome!! This is beautiful and heartfelt.
Cee 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on March 19, 2009 at 9:31 AM
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O, the lady sea has my son! Atonishing imagery my Sinome! The sea and the setting sun are a wondrous combination! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on March 19, 2009 at 7:37 AM
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One of those poems where I feel like I am there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 19, 2009 at 5:56 AM
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You bring out the different shades of emotions so well, and paint such vivid pictures. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 19, 2009 at 3:16 AM
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what can you say? mmmmm damn your good!
posted by
lestate7
on March 19, 2009 at 1:42 AM
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a nice weather description
posted by
Lanetay
on March 18, 2009 at 10:40 PM
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You write it so beautifully, Marta...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 18, 2009 at 9:57 PM
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Piognant...
...and full of lovely imagery(I love the water), yet somehow not depressing. I like the way you finished it...closure, yet a tinge of hope.
posted by
metalrat
on March 18, 2009 at 9:47 PM
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