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Beautiful as ever, very clever, see the other side

for in the winter, shed a tear, for Frog is no longer here

to hold her hand and watch her smile

she hates him now, he's vile

what must he do to soothe her tears,

that don't fill them both with fears.

posted by patdole on March 16, 2009 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful tribute and I hope your plea is realized! sam

posted by sam444 on March 13, 2009 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

Very intriguing poem! I am still figuring it out!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 12, 2009 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

posted by lestate7 on March 12, 2009 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

spiderfly
I was glued to the sound and the feelings expressed, poignant though they may be. Loved it and it compels me to say that you're a gifted poet.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 12, 2009 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful imagery, spiderfly

posted by myrrhage on March 12, 2009 at 12:35 PM | link to this | reply