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Sinome
Sad and whistful - but memories can still be little celebrations...

posted by Nautikos on March 7, 2009 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

So Sad...and yet somehow we are here to learn and love again. I'm speechless again and always enjoy your poetry.

posted by yellowrose55 on March 7, 2009 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

so beautiful, it leaves a tug for all that's gone by. but i'll raise a toast to a t'row that'll always shine  

posted by bythewindowsill on March 7, 2009 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Those were the days! Now all we can see is war on the horizon!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 6, 2009 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, likely we all could come up with a list of things that happened
"once upon a time", now we look back at them with sadness and wonder, why?.....

posted by Rumor on March 6, 2009 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

This is really nice and I like the change in the font size

posted by Lanetay on March 6, 2009 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply

heartbreaking...
Beautiful and yet so painful.  I love the poem but feel an urge to hug the poet.  Thank you for sharing

posted by lionreign on March 6, 2009 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Aww.... "Once upon a time"....

posted by Troosha on March 6, 2009 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! This wonderfull imagery covered the gamet of relationships perhaps even life! KUDOS my dear Sinome! Love you missy! sammy xoxoxo

posted by sam444 on March 6, 2009 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply

Yes my dear Sinome
once upon a time with the passing of which things that were once unbelievable become harsh reality; very well written and the imaging excellent my friend; great job; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on March 6, 2009 at 2:23 AM | link to this | reply

Very poignant and beautiful.....as was the picture in your last post. Thanks too for commenting on my post. God bless. Nita.

posted by Nita09 on March 6, 2009 at 12:18 AM | link to this | reply

posted by MasonGarrett on March 5, 2009 at 11:30 PM | link to this | reply

An immense sense of the passage of time and the changes within the seasons of lovers>Well illustrated Again Sinome.

posted by merkie on March 5, 2009 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

Tonight I'll be dreaming of cloudy mirrors and sour wine.  But, these roses never seem to run out.    

posted by TAPS. on March 5, 2009 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on March 5, 2009 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply