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Very enchanting poetry.

posted by hazel_st_cricket on February 28, 2009 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Your poetry is fun to read
and very readable.

posted by muley12 on February 28, 2009 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

I liked the idea of solace in the village, I would have thought quite the opposite! sam

posted by sam444 on February 27, 2009 at 1:19 PM | link to this | reply

Charming poem! Thanks for sharing it.

posted by elinjo on February 27, 2009 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

Great job Pat Dole.

posted by CRShelley on February 27, 2009 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

Both your poem and the comment before me are equally abuzz...

posted by Straightforward on February 27, 2009 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

so what is frog waiting for, I hear the bars in the village are bustling with song
Maybe the frog should go along
He could sit in the corner and drink with his mate
the one they call guilty and looks in a state.............

well written Frog xxx

posted by spiderfly on February 27, 2009 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply