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Deep! Bold! Most of all the ending was the ending. The right thing to do!!!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 6, 2010 at 6:36 PM
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Very true! If one did love they would not leave or stray! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 26, 2009 at 4:35 AM
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There's no pain in this world that matches that of a broken heart! Good writing!
posted by
CRShelley
on February 25, 2009 at 2:09 PM
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Spin and turn,leave rest the urn, for it is dust formed by the past, don't let it steal the love that lasts.
posted by
patdole
on February 25, 2009 at 1:49 PM
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in reply to the comment you left me, Our poem is a long one and in my blog you can see the first part SPIDER AND THE FLY at the begining of my blog. The spider has been caught in a triangle of love and as the fly has been playing games with her she is strong and plays the game. Sometimes it gets too much and her and emotions for the frog block her focus. then love conquers. and she understands that things are not all that they seem.
posted by
spiderfly
on February 25, 2009 at 12:57 PM
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please dont take the hurt with you as it gets heavy . Sometimes we need to move on especially from betrayal, as you said to me there is someone out there who deserves the love you have to give, Mine is not here because he has died but I have so much love still to give and even when relationships come to an end we can learn to respect and love what still exists.
posted by
spiderfly
on February 25, 2009 at 12:48 PM
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