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"Borrow my heart and feel what I feel"...wave after wave, the ripple affect is enormous, hitting every nerve. A Deep sea in a raging storm.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 18, 2009 at 7:20 PM
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Hey sweetie! I am so far behind on reading! I had to take time away! How are you? This is a magnificent poem! The imagery comes to life in every line and the tempo builds and my heart races! Awesome experience read this gem! Love you so!!!! sammy
posted by
sam444
on February 18, 2009 at 3:48 PM
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What can I say?
This put me right there with you, at the edge of the storm. Beautiful.
posted by
mneme
on February 18, 2009 at 10:04 AM
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You do a wonderful job of expressing those things. I would think that any serious reader of your work would have a pretty good idea about how sensitive you are.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 18, 2009 at 10:01 AM
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Very poignant indeed. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 18, 2009 at 9:00 AM
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comepletely moved me, sinome
posted by
bythewindowsill
on February 17, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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Beautiful ... so well expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on February 17, 2009 at 9:32 AM
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Sinome
I loved what Merkie said, that you allow us to enter your parlour of your emotions. (There's probably a poem in there somewhere). You most certainly do and one cannot help but read these kinds of poems with quiet reverence and empathy.
posted by
Troosha
on February 17, 2009 at 6:58 AM
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Beautiful Sinome
breathtakingly so; I was caught up so easily in this magnificent piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 17, 2009 at 5:11 AM
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This is magnificent. Alternating pain and relief, it is so real!
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 17, 2009 at 3:59 AM
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sharing your heart ..sharing with you some of what my heart said to you
Go to WHY TO WONDER FOR THE RAIN it is clash of the clouds it is kisses of the t
some of the rain poem
why to wonder
for the rain
why to wonder
it is clash of the clouds
it's embrace
it is kisses of the thunder,
it is A drink
for the thirst,
it is filling
for the hunger,
posted by
drohan254
on February 16, 2009 at 11:23 PM
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wow SINOME..Today all of us borrowing each other heart andsoul and it looks as we sing the same songs ..will post some of my why to wonder it is just matching so excellently what i said today andthe previous day
Borrow my heart and feel what I feel
when I see clouds and hear the thunder,
when the new born rain makes me wonder,
if G-d meant for rain drops to be so real
posted by
drohan254
on February 16, 2009 at 11:12 PM
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Again we enter the parlour of your emotions as they tug the heartstrings to empathy. Excellent Marta!
posted by
merkie
on February 16, 2009 at 10:00 PM
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I agree with Kabu.
posted by
Chilitree
on February 16, 2009 at 9:56 PM
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you really are a special poet you know love. This is amazing and so real
posted by
Kabu
on February 16, 2009 at 9:55 PM
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Dear princess, I am borrowing your heart and feeling what you are feeling, and wish to let you know a big WoW! xoxo from my warming desert sands to you ocean kissed ones.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 16, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL.
I felt and saw and hear through your poem
The silence within your skin as you observed the sun kneel and cry tears through the clouds. how awesome your experience It brings chills to my skin. Gives me 'goosebumps" I'm impressed with your
feelings and sensing. Excellent.
posted by
michaudblaine
on February 16, 2009 at 8:20 PM
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My goodness! I could see those angry clouds and billows roll. You paint a very vivid image with your poetry. You are an A-1 poet! Thanks!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on February 16, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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so very beautiful...very xxxoxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 16, 2009 at 7:18 PM
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