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with all that love he'll do just fine. enjoy him 3 is so special

posted by Kabu on February 16, 2009 at 10:30 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Samantha39 on February 16, 2009 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

my kids think I am deaf

posted by Lanetay on February 16, 2009 at 5:27 PM | link to this | reply

I like how you go from getting ready to wondering what his life will be like.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 16, 2009 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

Welcome to Blogit!
I like your poems.

posted by KaBooM62 on February 16, 2009 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply

There's an old saying about grandkids, "I had known there were so special, I'd had them

first!!!" Thanks for dropping by and reading me. I got more than I can count grandkids.l

posted by Winged on February 16, 2009 at 4:25 PM | link to this | reply

this is adorable. it gives the reader warm, sweet feelings.

i loved the part about bolting the door shut, and how he is sweet beyond expression.

posted by Luz_Briar on February 16, 2009 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

Ain't Kids
GRAND! Grandchildren are even grander. Nice job and every so true.

posted by BetsyLewis on February 16, 2009 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

With you there, his life will go well. Yes, I like the Lauder poem, and that beautiful  chorus. Thanks for reminding.

posted by EX_TURPI on February 16, 2009 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

Greatly Haiku'd, sweet and pure

posted by Bhaskar.ing on February 16, 2009 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Scot
Sounds like you got home safely with your daughter and grandson.  I smiled at the part about children checking us for mental fatigue.  Enjoy your visit with them!  No… I hadn’t heard the CBC show but it sounds like a hoot.  My favourite show is Vinyl Café – and I’m often inspired to write after I hearing Stuart McLean turn just about anythng into something magnificent.  

posted by Troosha on February 16, 2009 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent. Can relate to the incidents you describe so well in your poem.

posted by hardilaziz on February 16, 2009 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

Kids kid you not. BCA, Bill*s Cae

posted by BC-A on February 15, 2009 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply