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posted by
RenSpur
on February 13, 2009 at 2:46 AM
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You have a good day for it here. I'm not in Kansas but I think I am with the winds up there from the Cave. Yeah it's clever. Excellent! BCA, Bill ' s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on February 12, 2009 at 9:15 AM
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that is beautiful
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 10:37 PM
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Delightful! I liked the rhyme scheme and the cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 11, 2009 at 9:10 PM
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This is really good! You've got talent, my friend!
posted by
CRShelley
on February 11, 2009 at 7:28 PM
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