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Sinome

Remarkable poem this. I would love to read it again and again for its transparent quality!

posted by hardilaziz on February 9, 2009 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully done

That melancholy moment of loneliness aches from within your poem - fabulous

posted by lionreign on February 9, 2009 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

You have captured a moment of loneliness – but of clarity as well – so beautifully.

posted by Troosha on February 9, 2009 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Simple and very effective

posted by malcolm on February 9, 2009 at 5:54 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and touching Sinome

splendid imagery and emotion; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on February 9, 2009 at 3:29 AM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful and touching...yes, the moon does evoke many feelings and memories. Thanks for stopping by! God bless. Nita.

posted by snowview on February 9, 2009 at 3:05 AM | link to this | reply

The moon is such a special part of life.  It holds a store of memories for everyone who wishes it.

posted by TAPS. on February 8, 2009 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, it's full moon tomorrow night.

posted by Kabu on February 8, 2009 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

Simone

We all know those moments, filled with bitter-sweet memories...

posted by Nautikos on February 8, 2009 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

A memory of long ago

    

posted by skye08 on February 8, 2009 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

Ah! Such bittersweet memories.

It'll always be inside your head. No one can take it away.

posted by scotcanada on February 8, 2009 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 8, 2009 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

Heartfelt

posted by Ideologikal on February 8, 2009 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

Short & sweet! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 8, 2009 at 4:51 PM | link to this | reply

The moon can awaken the heart....or break it. Beautiful poem Sinome.

posted by yellowrose55 on February 8, 2009 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

Your feelings are poignant in the moonlight.Sweet Marta!

posted by merkie on February 8, 2009 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

A heart touching sentiment...that we have all felt at some part of our life..

posted by Wigopa_ on February 8, 2009 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

The longing and sadness are deep...

posted by Ariala on February 8, 2009 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

lovely and sad

posted by hazel_st_cricket on February 8, 2009 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply