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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 28, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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I added some more lines betsy . Finished?? I called this untitled dreams! Collective poem
posted by
merkie
on January 28, 2009 at 9:45 PM
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This is a moving write Betsy. Friends are so important to these children.Well done.
posted by
merkie
on January 28, 2009 at 9:34 PM
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Yeah, domestic violence happens not only in the marital family but in the
parental family too!
posted by
Straightforward
on January 28, 2009 at 3:54 AM
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Wow - so powerful!
It is wonderful that she had a friend like you to count on and lean on. Excellent write!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 27, 2009 at 7:34 AM
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I felt the pain of the parent chastising a child as you stood waiting! Then when she appears it was like a new world for the two of you! Comfort in being with a friend and knowing that you would be there! Very nice! A true friend indeed! Poignant imagery for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 27, 2009 at 2:13 AM
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A sweet one Betsy.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 26, 2009 at 9:27 PM
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Re: Very nice!
Thanks and thanks for your visit.
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 26, 2009 at 6:57 PM
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Very nice!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 26, 2009 at 6:38 PM
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Friends are precious. Thanks for reading. Those who do write poems are indebted to their readers.
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 26, 2009 at 6:25 PM
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Friends are a precious gift. I don't write poetry but I enjoy reading those who do. Thanks!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on January 26, 2009 at 6:11 PM
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