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Re: Great poem!
Not right now.

posted by flappergirl on January 30, 2009 at 11:52 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem!
I believe that when we have truly loved someone and then lost them, it purifies our heart so that we understand how we want to love and be loved.  The question is: can we trust?

posted by porcelaingoddess1 on January 29, 2009 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

I really the rationalization throughout this poem! The close is especially uplifting! sam

posted by sam444 on January 26, 2009 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent ! You offer a positve uplift in your poem It has a strong heartbeat.

posted by merkie on January 26, 2009 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

I love the turn-around in view and uplifting ending :)

posted by calia14 on January 25, 2009 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply