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Those are great lines!
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 30, 2009 at 7:40 AM
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I love the last two lines of that poem.
I guess its because that's about where I am in life. LOL
"....So thank your stars that matters are no worse,
And read your Bible, sir, and mind your purse."
posted by
TAPS.
on January 25, 2009 at 1:36 PM
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Thanks, Merkie!
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 25, 2009 at 11:57 AM
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This is good 'cause it gives an awareness to rhythm in our poems. Good post Betsy.
posted by
merkie
on January 25, 2009 at 11:45 AM
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You covered this very well! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 25, 2009 at 3:08 AM
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So interesting
Thank you for sharing this :) And thank you for reading me too!
posted by
phantomqueen
on January 24, 2009 at 9:05 PM
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Yeah - I guess it can have that affect. I guess that's where I find the challenge. Thanks for reading it, though!
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 24, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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I guess I have enough trouble getting poems to rhyme figuring this formula has my mind boggled
posted by
Lanetay
on January 24, 2009 at 6:14 PM
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