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Wow! There is so much in this one! I adored lick the walls! sam
posted by
sam444
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January 23, 2009
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A lot of rage
Reminded me a bit of an Alanis Morrissette lyric
posted by
malcolm
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January 23, 2009
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that is brutal
but excellently written - the rage blazes from this poem
posted by
lionreign
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January 23, 2009
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The imagery of anger delineated perfectly
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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January 22, 2009
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"grin of pride", "moan-grope", amazing use of words . . .
posted by
Soaker
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January 22, 2009
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That was a long one
posted by
lustorlove
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January 22, 2009
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disgust and fear
it's a poem about being disgusted with a person's choices and needing to silently observe the whole scenerio. for the full effect, i did not edit the angry tone of the poem
posted by
Luz_Briar
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January 22, 2009
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