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I really like the building of the imagery and concluding with a thanks gave it such congruity!
Just being my was superb too! sam
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sam444
on January 16, 2009 at 8:35 AM
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Isn’t it strange how we tend to lash out at or mistreat the ones we love the most…we all do it, we all regret it, and we all learn from (we hope).
posted by
Troosha
on January 14, 2009 at 10:41 AM
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we do strike those who are nearest
even when we just lash out from pain. I loved the phrase "just being my". Very nice poem - thank you for sharing it
posted by
lionreign
on January 14, 2009 at 7:10 AM
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so nicely and wisely said it....
posted by
Star5_
on January 14, 2009 at 6:42 AM
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True, true . . . we hurt the ones we love the most!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 14, 2009 at 2:39 AM
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contagion_publishing
on January 14, 2009 at 2:11 AM
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