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Right on! Love the word play! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 14, 2009 at 10:40 AM
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I think we sometimes say more by saying nothing but goodbye. I think we all can relate to this Geraldine
posted by
merkie
on January 13, 2009 at 4:01 PM
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pernese
There are certain times in our lives when that cool exterior comes in handy – great piece!
posted by
Troosha
on January 13, 2009 at 11:52 AM
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Leave him anyway.
Well captured feelings of breaking up with someone you trusted in love. I've felt the pain in my life many times when I was younger. Well done. I could remember the feeling as I read the poem. The things they wukk bever jbiw abiyt ys abd giw nycg ut neab ti ys,
posted by
michaudblaine
on January 13, 2009 at 10:33 AM
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