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I prefer face to face, we can get carried away into fantasy behind the cell.

posted by serene09 on January 13, 2009 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

Romantic interlude on the silver screen Sweet!

posted by merkie on January 9, 2009 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

Loved this...The emotion is just so sweet and alluring...Well done!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 8, 2009 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

Neat
Romance can take wing in many different ways  Great poem

posted by calia14 on January 8, 2009 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

love as vicarious experience
Thanks for sharing such technologically romantic soliloquy - a vicarious love experience unlimited by time and space. I love it

posted by Rotsen on January 8, 2009 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

I thought it was wonderful imagery! sam

posted by sam444 on January 7, 2009 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

Very cool work!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 7, 2009 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Awsome write your creativity off the chain! The ending cry me a river. lols

posted by Mystereo on January 7, 2009 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

rubypoem ~.~
The modern cell phone -- another, more updated, medium  through which love can flourish. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on January 7, 2009 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply

I like this
I had to read it a couple of times to get the flavour (I had a little trouble with the rhythm in the last couple of lines) but the description is excellent.  thank you

posted by lionreign on January 7, 2009 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

wow!!!!!!

posted by Star5_ on January 7, 2009 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

An exceptional tale of cyber love my friend!
excellent imagery and fine wording; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 7, 2009 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply