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Luz, certainly as provocative as always....
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(don't give up on me with "Night Walkers"..:) Its coming slowwly..and I don't want to rush it when my mind is on too many other things)
posted by
Rumor
on January 10, 2009 at 9:38 AM
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Interesting subject for a poem.
Very daring and well done.
posted by
metalrat
on January 7, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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Such an awesome surprise ending! Outstanding! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 7, 2009 at 6:42 PM
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intense and emotional
I love your ability to create an atmosphere so swiftly in a piece. Great job
posted by
lionreign
on January 7, 2009 at 7:17 AM
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Fascinating
and very intense!
posted by
malcolm
on January 7, 2009 at 5:44 AM
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Luz_Briar, I'd never heard of a dogwhale, so I googled it. Didn't get much satisfaction. Found lots of whales listed but no dog. Liked the poem though.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 6, 2009 at 11:17 PM
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Luz Briar
Well I'd sure hate to be stranded in the birth canal of a whale but it's very poetic luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 6, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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