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Luz, certainly as provocative as always....

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(don't give up on me with "Night Walkers"..:)  Its coming slowwly..and I don't want to rush it when my mind is on too many other things)

posted by Rumor on January 10, 2009 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting subject for a poem.

Very daring and well done.

posted by metalrat on January 7, 2009 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

Such an awesome surprise ending! Outstanding! sam

posted by sam444 on January 7, 2009 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

intense and emotional

I love your ability to create an atmosphere so swiftly in a piece.  Great job

posted by lionreign on January 7, 2009 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

Fascinating

and very intense!

posted by malcolm on January 7, 2009 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

Luz_Briar, I'd never heard of a dogwhale, so I googled it.  Didn't get much satisfaction.  Found lots of whales listed but no dog.   Liked the poem though.

posted by TAPS. on January 6, 2009 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

Luz Briar

Well I'd sure hate to be stranded in the birth canal of a whale but it's very poetic luv.

posted by WileyJohn on January 6, 2009 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply