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Love the phrasing
and I feel like I know exactly what you mean - that makes it a brilliant poem by my definition
posted by
lionreign
on January 7, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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This is definitely good! No happiness ever after in this brew!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 6, 2009 at 5:22 PM
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Go for it!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on January 6, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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enjoyed
posted by
riri0322
on January 6, 2009 at 11:04 AM
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Awesome and they do love! 
posted by
BC-A
on January 6, 2009 at 12:15 AM
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A most excellent dare here....Very well done!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 6, 2009 at 12:06 AM
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Take that dare and see what happens! Wonderful Haiku! You may have found your niche in poetry! Keep up the great work! Nice to see you post too! Have a great evening! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 5, 2009 at 10:15 PM
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That's a mighty good try, Yellowrose.
"Try" just might not be the right word.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 5, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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daring me to live, I love it
posted by
Kabu
on January 5, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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Good haiku Vicky. They are addicting after awhile! Dare to dream and keep living!Cool!
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 8:06 PM
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