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Re: Thank you Lust-a bit different I guess! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 7, 2009 at 9:34 AM
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interesting concept of weather, very well done
posted by
Lanetay
on January 5, 2009 at 8:55 AM
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Re: Thank you wigopa-I'm pleased you like it and that it brought back a
memory for you! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 4, 2009 at 1:55 PM
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My mother told me something like this when I was little..I use to be afarid of the south dakota thunderstorms...I remember her sitting me down and saying "God and his friends are bowling..the thunder is the ball hitting the pins and the lighting is their shout of victory.." Excellent work Chris!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 4, 2009 at 9:07 AM
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Re: Thank you so much Sam! I KNOW there are very many MORE links-
we can so readily make-however-how long is a 'Haiku'? Thank you again.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 4, 2009 at 5:16 AM
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Re: Great double Haiku all the passage were awsome, I'll continue to read.
Many thanks indeed Mystereo! Yes-I went back to see your poem to your Mother and left a comment for you there.It is a Beautifull read.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 4, 2009 at 5:14 AM
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Re: Scramble
Thank you so much Troosha! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 4, 2009 at 5:13 AM
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Awesome work Scramble! You are masterful! KUDOS AND BRAVO TOO!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 3, 2009 at 9:27 PM
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Great double Haiku all the passage were awsome, I'll continue to read.
I want to share Mother:Portrait Of A Hero next to the last poem onthe 4th page. Thank you.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 3, 2009 at 6:59 PM
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Scramble
All the nuances of nature and God – the two are inseparable and you’ve done a wonderful job of linking the two. 
posted by
Troosha
on January 3, 2009 at 3:44 PM
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Re: So creative!
Thank you so much calia! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 3, 2009 at 1:31 PM
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Re: God & nature beautifully connected thru verse...what a talent...
My Dear Ash-Thank you so much! You say the truly nicest things.God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 3, 2009 at 1:30 PM
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Re: Hello Sinome--thank you for your lovely comment! There are many
ways I used to try to find-to 'sooth' the kids!THUNDER-God's moving His furniture around.etc.etc.I would think you have similar? God bless. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 3, 2009 at 1:29 PM
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Re: Many thanks indeed merkie! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 3, 2009 at 1:27 PM
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Re: Chris ~.~
Many thanks soulspeaker I'm pleased you like this! God bless.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 3, 2009 at 1:26 PM
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So creative!
I like how you did that!
posted by
calia14
on January 3, 2009 at 1:21 PM
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God & nature beautifully connected thru verse...what a talent...
only you can produce such a wonderful piece my dear friend! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 3, 2009 at 12:01 PM
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I loved this! so lovingly threaded together... so sweet. they soothed my soul soul... I must remember your poem dear Chris for when one of my little kids asks about the sun, the snow, the rain, the wind or the breeze... I will remember it :-)
posted by
Sinome
on January 3, 2009 at 11:22 AM
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Beautiful expressions,insightful and clear!
posted by
merkie
on January 3, 2009 at 10:55 AM
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Chris ~.~
Very nice...how you liken the forces of nature to the nature of God. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 3, 2009 at 10:51 AM
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