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Re: While You Are Alive

Hi, soulspeaker

If was nice of you to read my poetry. Thanks, Mind Portal

posted by Mind_Portal on April 27, 2009 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: While You Are Alive

Hi, Sam444

Your understanding is most comforting. Mind Portal

posted by Mind_Portal on April 27, 2009 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

Re: While You Are Alive

Yes, Sam444, we do learn when it comes to our loved ones and friends.

posted by Mind_Portal on January 3, 2009 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Mind_Portal ~.~

Thank you for stopping by, soulspeaker.

posted by Mind_Portal on January 3, 2009 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: While You Are Alive

In humble thanks, Rasse

posted by Mind_Portal on January 3, 2009 at 4:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This is heartful.

Thank you for stopping by and reading my poetry, Msstereo

posted by Mind_Portal on January 3, 2009 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

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Hi, jfm32

I am glad you stopped by to read my poem. It is one of the Japanese forms of petry.The Haiku is a short poem of 3 line using five syllables in the first, seven syllables in the second and five syllables in the third line. It doesn't rhyme and my poem is about human nature.

I hope I have answered your question; if not leave me another comment.

Thank you for your kindness.

posted by Mind_Portal on January 3, 2009 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

Agree with sam444

posted by Straightforward on January 3, 2009 at 1:23 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant! We al should be positively influenced by those who suffer and remain steadfast! Wonderful tribute too! sam

posted by sam444 on January 2, 2009 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

Mind_Portal ~.~

Such a powerful message...Haiku style. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.

~SS

posted by soulspeaker on January 2, 2009 at 3:35 AM | link to this | reply

This is a wonderful note, and I'm glad you wrote it, and it touched me.
But I'm wondering, since it is written in 3 lines (and why not 1 sentence) why you would consider this a poem. I'm quite serious, and would like to hear from you.