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i didn't like the Dark Knight

posted by ladychardonnay on January 2, 2009 at 2:33 PM | link to this | reply

benzinha
The strangest thing happened, but I won't explain it here. I'll send you an email sometime this weekend.

posted by Talion_ on January 1, 2009 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Pat_B
I find I frequently feel that way when she's not around. Nothing is accomplished. I'm just passing time.

posted by Talion_ on January 1, 2009 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply

sam444
Thanks. Same to you.

posted by Talion_ on January 1, 2009 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS.
I'm well aware of that after losing my mother and two of her sisters in less than two years. The longing of a moment doesn't come close to the longing of forever, but it is still sometimes intense. Thanks.  

posted by Talion_ on January 1, 2009 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully done, Talion.
Especially the thread of wistfulness, the little sense that something was missing in the midst of the festivities, the air of making do until Queen V could be with you. I love your writing.

posted by Pat_B on January 1, 2009 at 3:56 AM | link to this | reply

This was a wonderful recap of events! Happy New Year! sam

posted by sam444 on December 31, 2008 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TexasGem

And you always do, Talion, you always do.

Another smooth and generous piece of writing.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

posted by benzinha on December 31, 2008 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

But, Talion, you are so fortunate for the time that she is at home.
Some loved ones are only remembered and never come home again.
Great writing though.
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posted by TAPS. on December 31, 2008 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

TexasGem
No, this is for real. If I had the time and inclination, all of my posts would be like this. If you're going to take the time to read, I should at least take the time to rewrite and polish.

posted by Talion_ on December 31, 2008 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

Is this part of your novel or
is this for real? It well-written and very detailed. Good job!  Pass the bacon please!

posted by Texas_Gem on December 31, 2008 at 4:13 PM | link to this | reply