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Gorgeous!
You've so written my predicament right now. It's sad to have to love and let go, at the same time!
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gypsypoet1975
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January 15, 2009
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beautiful, deep, and romantic...wish you happiness and love


posted by
fairygoddess
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January 13, 2009
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It's a very difficult position, but I completely understand wanting
someone's happiness before your own.

Anything that is meant to be will find a way to thrive.
posted by
Sunnybeach7
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January 11, 2009
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Realistic, sensible, and practical.
posted by
EX_TURPI
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January 11, 2009
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Wow simply beautiful
described how I feel right now perfectly.
I would like to share this though: No love is ever in vain... because it is the most powerful force in the universe. If it is felt in your heart, it is felt in the other's heart as well. It is just that you accept it more readily...
posted by
zuraffo
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January 7, 2009
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There's a lot of pushing and pulling in this romantic cry....
I like it a lot.


posted by
yellowrose55
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January 7, 2009
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Very sincerely, in love. . .
I used to sing a song - I think - of Sue Thompson which says: "goodbye, I hate to see you go but have a good time.." You said it really straight forward. I like to think that People can be prisoners of love, but not love as prison for anyone. I love this
posted by
Rotsen
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January 6, 2009
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Amazing and deeply heartfelt!
Wonderfully scripted. And I agree, gives one much to ponder!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
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January 3, 2009
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This is great, Straightforward.
It gives a person a lot to think about.
posted by
TAPS.
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January 2, 2009
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brave poem! Happy New Year!
posted by
Ariala
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January 1, 2009
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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January 1, 2009
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Interesting to and fro argumentative thrusts! Happy New Year!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 31, 2008
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HAPPY NEW YEARS
posted by
Samantha39
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December 31, 2008
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Deep and poignant expressions!
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 31, 2008
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Straightforward ~.~
Great write -- deeply moving...with a sense of honesty and awareness.Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
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soulspeaker
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December 31, 2008
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Excellent realization and understanding! I can't help but things break ups would be much easier with an adopted attitude that is so aptly portrayed in this poem! Kudos! Happy New Year! sam
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sam444
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December 31, 2008
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We call that loving you for me........
Beautifully done my friend; many thanks and a very blessed and happy New Year to you
posted by
mariaki
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December 31, 2008
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Happy New Year and here's to lots more poetry.
posted by
Kabu
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December 30, 2008
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Awsome write your are a lease trueful. Deep insight with deep long roots.
posted by
Mystereo
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December 30, 2008
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