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And then, the sounds of silence......this is how I ended your poem....if you are familiar with that Hit Song, the sound of silence! There was no other meaning!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 30, 2008 at 10:40 PM
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Sinome
That poem brought the feel of warm sun and sand to me and right now I appreciate that very much luv. Happy New Year.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 30, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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And then, the sounds of silence!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 30, 2008 at 8:29 PM
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I can't help but love your work deep insight and war creativity.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 30, 2008 at 8:18 PM
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true...
great mood-setting words used.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on December 30, 2008 at 7:28 PM
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wonderful !!! xxxxooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on December 30, 2008 at 4:11 PM
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Many look at them but none see the meaning that they hold for me
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, MUST HAVE BEEN A GREAT VIEW, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on December 30, 2008 at 3:13 PM
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war is never pretty, Sinome, for anyone, especially children...you have
painted a sobering picture...
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posted by
Rumor
on December 30, 2008 at 10:00 AM
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Sinome
It's amazing to me how you can invoke such powerful images and feelings which such economy of language...great work!
posted by
Nautikos
on December 30, 2008 at 6:25 AM
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Very deep and powerful my dear Sinome
perfect imagery here; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 30, 2008 at 5:33 AM
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Sinome, this is a great poem for cloud lovers (which I have always been).
posted by
TAPS.
on December 30, 2008 at 3:36 AM
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I understand this transition all too well! Only mine had a choice! It is the sun in rust when the boy chronologially holds the gun and is the toy soldier! Such a sad occurrence! Poignant! sammy xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on December 30, 2008 at 2:24 AM
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Beautiful! Powerful!! Phenomenal!!! That's how I am going to describe my princess Marta, with a happy and presperous New Year with lots of xoxos sent her way from her prince of the desert sands.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 29, 2008 at 11:41 PM
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Childhood departs and the children are now real soldiers of war. So sad! Great imagery and flow Marta.Timely comment on world events.
posted by
merkie
on December 29, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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Melancholy and beautiful. I love your work.
posted by
calia14
on December 29, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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Indescribably powerful and beautiful. You're such a genius with words. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on December 29, 2008 at 10:15 PM
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This sent chills right up my spine
wonderful work.
posted by
Bel_
on December 29, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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