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as i was saying rhyme? what you are doing here is more like a journal keeping . the writing down of ones thoughts during any given day. to call this poetry..............oh hell NEVERMIND  there IS  a catagory in poetry that encomasses this sort of writing. (i prefer to call it scribbleing) it's call "free verse" look it up. one other thing........do you actually make money with this stuff? i honestly would like to know.

posted by warriorwitch on January 6, 2009 at 1:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: That is great. But, the way you wrote this delights the heart, great write!
Yes THAT is a very good way to put it. Drips. have you considered style or form? rythum or possibly rhy

posted by warriorwitch on January 6, 2009 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

glad to hear about Sher Sher

posted by riri0322 on December 30, 2008 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

So very happy for you; but mostly Sher Sher! Well versed too! sam

posted by sam444 on December 30, 2008 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: That is great. But, the way you wrote this delights the heart, great write!
Thank you for your comments.  I am glad you enjoy my try at poetry.  It just kind of drips out of me with no warning.  Have a Happy New Year and a safe one too.

posted by michaudblaine on December 29, 2008 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

That is great. But, the way you wrote this delights the heart, great write!

posted by Mystereo on December 29, 2008 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply