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I was enthralled...
...by this enchanting story. It has such a nice ebb and flow of intriguing plot and dialogue with embraceable characters.
I eagerly await more.
posted by
metalrat
on January 1, 2009 at 12:08 PM
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It is a wonderful twist to the end! One can ponder in their aimless wandering that they might come upon a sequel perhaps? I enjoyed this adventure! It was not the happy ending and I think that is what gives it its charm! Also some errors just do not have a remedy as can be seen from several incidents, the loss of the dragon's mate, the kings men, John and so forth! I thought you did a splendid job with this tale! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 29, 2008 at 3:11 PM
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Luz Briar
Happy New Year
You manage a nice working of dialogue between princess and beast for emotion. You conjure up an effective ending. The princess sings again love. All in all you write a nice read.
posted by
BC-A
on December 29, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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Oh my!
So the end of the magikcal races was caused by a drunken princess? I'm not sure whether I am saddened or want to laugh...
Beautiful twist though and a very unexpected end - bravo!
posted by
lionreign
on December 29, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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and thus is why such creatures all went extinct..Well done, Luz...
A bit of melancoly as the story ends..
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posted by
Rumor
on December 28, 2008 at 9:26 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 27, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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